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Monday''s morning and Wednesday''s morning,I read Chinese book.Tuesday''s morning;Thurday''s morning and Friday''s morning,I read Engilsh book.I often at Saturday morning do my homework.at aftenoon I cen play computer,I can wtch TV one hour at evening.tomorrow is sunday,I must do housework wish my mother,mother give me ten Yuan at every week.名师点评：在这篇英文小作文中，小作者向我们介绍了他在一周中的活动。每周一、三早上小作者阅读语文，周二、四、五早上则是读英语。“at Saturday morning”要改为“on saturday morning”，“cen play computer”改为“can play computer”,“at evening”改为“in the evening”或“at night ”，“I must do housework ”后要加句号，“at every week”改为“every week”。继续加油！（学乐中国特聘教师：邹紫老师）2009-11-29 16:04:00
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