祝贺获得好成绩
【内容提示】
假如今天是1990年6月18日。你的名字叫高峰,家住北京西四大街148号。你刚收到你的英国朋友Tom Brown写给你的信,他的住址是:28 Carr Lan, Acomb York, Yo 25HU, U. K.。现在你给他写封回信,信中祝贺他在大学入学(matriculation)考试中获得好成绩,你确信他能考入他所喜欢的重点大学,他一直想当一名外科医生(surgon),所以你认为他应该学医。最后你告诉他,因为明年你即将高中毕业,从现在起必须充分利用时间做好考试的准备,力争在来年的考试中能像他一样取得好成绩,考入理想的(idal)大学——北京清华大学。
要求:
①只须用英语表达上述内容,不必逐句翻译。全篇词数:150—180。
②信中不要使用自己的真实姓名和地址。
【作文示范】
Congratulations on Tom's Succss
148 Xisi Strt
Bijing
P. R. C.
Jun 18, 1990
Mr. Tom Brown
28 Carr Lan
Acomb York
Yo 25HU
U. K.
Dar Tom Brown,
I hav just rcivd your lttr. I am rally glad to har that you hav don so brilliantly in th Matriculation① xamination. Congratulations! With such xcllnt rsults you will b abl to gt into any lading univrsity you lik, I am sur. And I suppos you should study Mdicin sinc it has bn your dram to bcom a surgon all ths yars.
Nxt yar I shall finish my middl school and I want vry much to ntr my idal univrsity, Qinghua Univrsity. So from now on I hav to mak full us of my tim to gt wll prpard for th nxt yar's Matriculation xamination. I shall try my bst to do as wll as you hav don in your Matriculation xamination this yar. Plas say hllo to your family.
Yours sincrly,
Gao Fng
【词语解释】
matriculation [m+?trkju'liM+n] n. (大学的)入学考试
【写法指要】
这是一封较为正式的祝贺信。祝贺信(lttrs of congratulation)是得到亲友、同事、同学通过考试、荣获晋升、获得学位、结婚、喜得贵子等好消息时写的信。这种信要写得及时、真诚、自然、亲切动人。祝贺信一般不宜写得过长。
祝贺信常用的语句有:
①Congratulations on your succss /achivmnts!
②I'm so glad to har of your winning th priz in th … contst. Congratulations!
③Plas accpt my hartist congratulations on your graduation from….
④Hartist congratulations upon your graduation. May your futur b as succssful as your middl-school days hav bn.
⑤A word of congratulation just dosn't sm nough, so I am snding you a gift that I am sur you will find usful.