My name is WangJiawen.I'm in class four,grade six.I have a round face,short hair and two big eyes.I'm not very tall.I'm really a lucky girl. 名师点评:
I am sure you are a lucky girl.A short and simple article.A luscious, vivid description.You’ve done a good job! 一篇简短明了的文章,包含了生动活泼的描述。如果不是一个象你一样灵动聪慧的女孩,怎么能做到呢?做得很棒哦!真的很希望看到你越来越多生动闪光的文字!(快乐学堂特聘教师:周老师) 2009-3-18 12:49:01