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动态描写:大陈岛纪游-A Visit to Dachn Islands 大陈岛纪游
【内容提示】
写一篇游记，把你们一路走一路看的山水湖海的美景写下来。比如，你们要去某地，需要乘火车或汽车，也许还要坐轮船等交通工具，一路上看到祖国或世界的大好河山，感慨万千，由衷地对那些天造地设、神工鬼斧般的秀丽山川或历史名胜赞叹不已。
【作文示范】
A Visit to Dachn Islands
Last summr, th wathr was hottr than usual, so som of my frinds and I dcidd to go to th Dachn Islands and spnd a fw days thr.
On our way, w lookd out of th ship's windows and saw many littl grn islands on th sa.
With a loud whistl th ship wnt into th harbor. Through th windows, I saw many fishing boats sailing hr and thr. Thy wnt out of th harbor with hop and cam back with loads of fish. On th markt I saw a lot of baskts full of fish.
Th nxt day, w all got up arly and wnt to th bach nar th hotl to watch th sun rising. W lookd to th ast. Th clouds wr rddish, and thn turnd bright rd. Soon th sun slowly appard and bgan to ris. Th sky around th sun was vry bright and th sun lookd lik a big ball. Th sight was so bautiful that w would nvr forgt.
Not only is th scnry bautiful on th Dachn Islands, but also th popl thr ar vry kind.
During our stay w njoyd th bautiful scnry and at a lot of sa food. To our disappointmnt, w had to lav th islands, but w'll always rmmbr this trip and th popl thr.
（选自《英语画刊》高中版1996年第4期）
【写法指要】
本文作者记述了他和同学们乘船去大陈岛游览和小住的情况。除引言段外，全文分两个层次：二、三、四段写景，人随景走，景随人移——海上，渔船点点；市上，鲜鱼筐筐；日出美景永难忘；第五、六段写人——人情好，海味美。文章构成了一幅动态的画面。
动态描写:大陈岛纪游-A Visit to Dachn Islands
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