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My name is wing. I have many friends. Li Hua is my best friend.We are in the same class. She studies very well.And she is a good monitor. Because she hardworking and very kind. She is good at English. She likes having an English lesson. She always helps others. She often helps me study English. She sings well. We all like listening to her songs.I so lucky, because I have a best friend. We will be good friends forever!名师点评：小作者用英语介绍了一位自己的好朋友，将好朋友的学习情况、爱好及其性格都描绘了出来。从英语语法的角度出发，小作者使用了一般现在时，第三人称的动词变化也用得非常正确，语法准确，表述完整。但是小作者在英语的书写上要注意哦，单词与单词之间要有空格，像这样看上去比较吃力哦！（学乐中国特聘教师：许奕文老师）2008-11-28 21:12:00
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