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Washing ApplesMrs.Johnson has a fruit shop in town. She is friendly to everyone. So people like to buy fruit in her shop. One Sunday morning, she found all the apples were big and nice. Her son Mike likes them very much. So she brought some home.After lunch, she put them on the table. That afternoon, Mike came bake earlier. He was very hungry. He found the apples and ate most of them. Mrs.Jonhson came bake.She asked, “Mike, did you see the apples? Did you eat them？”Mike answered,“Yes, mum. I ate a lot of them. I was very hungry.”“Did you wash them?”Mike didn’t answer her. After a few minutes, her son was drinking lots of water. “Are you thirsty?”she asked.“No, I’m washing the apples in my body by the water.” Mike answered.名师点评：这篇英文作文主要写的是约翰逊太太和儿子迈克就洗苹果的事进行的一番对话，文章主题明确，构思很棒喔！首先小作者介绍了约翰逊太太以及她买苹果的事，为下文情节的开展打好了基础。约翰逊太太买了苹果放在家里，儿子迈克看到了，因为饥饿，他吃了很多。约翰逊太太便问他有没有将苹果洗了，迈克告诉妈妈自己是用身上的水洗的。故事将迈克淘气的形象塑造出来了，小作者的叙事能力很强，英文水平很高，值得大家学习。希望小作者努力学习外语，锻炼自己的写作能力，将来成为翻译家！“came bake”应该是“came back”。（学乐中国特聘教师：王运连老师）2010-7-12 11:49:00
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