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I am Xu Jingyu ,my English name is Bide.I am ten.My mother is a little bit fat,she is doucter.My dad is handsome man,he is policeman.I interest different games and English.when I am free I like play football.I like P.E class.名师点评：这篇英文版的家庭介绍简单明了，在语法上也存在一些问题。比如“doucter”要改为“doctor”。“sheisdoucter.Mydadishandsomeman,heispoliceman”要改为“she is a doctor .My dad is a handsome man , he is a policeman.”小作者要继续努力，你的英文会越来越好的！（学乐中国特聘教师：邹紫老师）2009-8-21 12:26:00
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